Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Climate crisis is one

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the main challenges of our time. Some people think that the most important problem is the loss of

species

,

however

, others

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that there are more important environmental issues to be solved.

This

essay will discuss both points of views and

also

will expose my personal opinion on the matter.

First

of all, wildlife extinction has lead to the collapse of many ecosystems around the globe. Once the equilibrium of an ecosystem fails produce several changes which are unpredictable and dangerous.

For example

, Polar bears have almost

dissapeared

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disappeared

on Russia over the

last

twenty years.

As a result

, many fish

species

have decided to go

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the polar artic for food.

This

caused an increase of two grades in the water temperature which resulted

on

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higher

sea

levels, more raining and floods. We are losing

species

of plants and animals

everyday

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, but a few people

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aware that many ecosystems are at risk which could impact us later by producing chaos and natural disasters.

Conversely

, there are many other issues to be solved. Each year humans are constantly filling the atmosphere with more fossil waste. As a consequence of cars, trucks and electricity suppliers have not stopped to use fossil fuels to generate energy, the

level

of pollution is sky-rocketing and scientist stated that it could not be feasible to live in the earth in 2150.

Moreover

, keeping the same contamination rate for the

next

twenty years, scientist pointed out that more than thirty

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of the land could be vanished, due to

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ver-growing

sea

level

.

Thus

, it is clear that

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solving the loss of animals and plants is not enough to solve the climate crisis. There are many other challenges which are urgently required to be solved

such

as the carbon dependency and the

raise

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of

sea

level

. In conclusion,

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essay presented two views about

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environmental problems. The

first

one states that the

species

vanishing is the current main problem of our era and the

second

one which claims that there are

others

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relevant problems as well. From my point of view, despite the fact that the loss of

species

has several impacts

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life on earth, I support the

second

claim. In my opinion, there are more urgent problems to be solved

such

as fossil fuel dependency and the rise of

sea

level

.