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Animal testing has always been controversial issue. Some people believe that governments should ban these practices completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The animal exploitation experiment is always cons and pros in society. A group of people argue that a serious step has to be taken by the
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 without any excuse.
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, ahead of my stance, the animal should be a subject of an experimental idea before it applied to human. Animal testing of some products is necessary before it tested to the human race. In
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 case, the products which are relating research purpose,
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 as, medication.
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, it expected able to produced immune to protect the human body’s from any harmful parasites.
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, research about particular illness in a vaccine factory need to create a powerful vaccine and testing their product to the animal which closes to human’s gen, in
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 case, monkey.
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, there are many serious problems if the
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 ban all animal testing practices.
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, the problems can be a boomerang for the
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.
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, a Vaccine demand ‘sky-rockets’ in a particular country which face a deadly virus, because
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’s band animal testing, the vaccine cannot be produced.
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, a lot of people died.
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, lockdown is needed to stop the virus spread.
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, the
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 need to support people’s financially who impacted by the lockdown.
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 is absolute will impact to the national economy. To conclude,
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 the animal is a human being, they are still needed for human living purposes,
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 as medication and research.
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 as an imminent institution should support animal testing before it applied to human because it gives many advantages.
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