People nowadays prefer to interact online (e.g. do shopping, chat with friends) rather than talking to other people face-to-face. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays people prefer online rather than talking to each other face-to-face. They might have many different reasons. Let talk about it.
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, I think the main reason that people prefer online is convenient.
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, a woman wants to buy a tie for her husband's birthday gift. She just needs to choose the tie and order online. After that,she just needs to wait for the delivery.It is easier than face-to-face shopping with a shopping assistant and went to the shopping mall. It can save more time for some meaningful things.
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, the reason is we can't see the person whom we talk with. We can see the surface changing on the person's surface. I t will be easier to communicate. There is a real story in the reality, a
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and a staff are communicating with work face-to-face, she might be afraid to say anything if the
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's facing angry. If the staff communicates with her
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online. She will have less stress,she doesn't need to care about her leaders feeling.She can say what she wants.Through
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,it can help the
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to open the communicate,have more innovative ideas.
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, I think
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is a positive development.It can let
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people.
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,the coronavirus is coming. People must quarantine at home to stay safe. The most effective way is not going out.
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people must go out to shop there food and living product,
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becomes the most important problems during the COVID-19. The way can solve
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problem is order online. It can help the people avoid going out face to face with the sales and decrease the virus attract.
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,I want to say the benefit of online is much more than the disadvantages. If we use it in time ,
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will be the "precious gift" for the people's life.
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