Some people say that school children should be given individual class work, while others think that working in small groups is better for them. Discuss both approaches and include your own opinión.

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education has suffered one of the biggest change in history, mainly because of the globalization era. The way of how we are connected to each other has made
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that students from marginalized areas have
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to information and some knowledge that before was exclusive to the wealthiest children.
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educational gaps has been again coming up due to COVID pandemic,
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of view and will support why is better to
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learning methods among other students rather than
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, it is important to consider that individual learning class has some advantages
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as the personalization process of teaching, at the same time that helps parents to have a deeper record of the development of their children,
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some studies have shown that children who learn alone evolve
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but are lack of soft skills. People who advocate for having small groups to learn, support that idea because they strongly believe that social human interaction is a must in children shape-behaviour. Great understanding of the environment, developing kindness at
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or just get over at a difficult situation are a few reasons why children ought to be in class with some students.
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a recent studied of Cleveland university showed that parents could monitor and boost their children progress by some following digital tools that allowed them to keep in contact while their children are at school. To summarize, both
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of views have some advantages, but in my opinion
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firmly suggest that the best way of
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the tools that are needed to be a great human being in current times should be
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human interactions.
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a doubt the benefits of having small learning groups
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