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One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution. do you agree or disagree ?

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 security is one of the major challenge faced by most of the nations across the globe. Some belief, organic
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 is the only effective solution to overcome it. Whereas, others insist on
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 scientifically modified to produce in mass quantity as
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the dynamic growing needs of
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urging population. In my opinion, I agree on the later, considering the paramount of benefits it offers to needy people to suppress their hunger. A good reason to consider
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 re-engineered genetically for human consumption is, it can be produced with minimal human efforts on any type of environmental conditions at bare little land and water.
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, while cultivating they are designed to combat possible infections, which in turn utilizes bare minimum fertilizers. To illustrate,
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 or crops derived from the brainchild of humans needs fewer fertilizers as they are genetically designed to survive in harsh weather conditions and can be cultivated in dry areas. Another reason to highlight, Genetically Modified Organisms (in short GMO) is the only option in sight, which facilitates
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 security to the majority of people. These should be under the supervision of government with stringent rules and regulations to control and measure the quality of the yield. To cite an example, the population across the world surged approximately 120% in the past five decades. Whereas, only 18% of the land brought under the umbrella of cultivation, genetically engineered
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 acts as a catalyst and covers up for the shortage In conclusion, nations are limited with options considering the catastrophe of lack of quality
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 to their citizens. The only option feasible to overcome the monster of
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 security is to encourage and rely on scientific foods which can grow at any given environmental conditions with less amount of natural resources.
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