Governments around the world spend too much money on treating illnesses and diseases and not enough on health education and prevention. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I agree with the statement that Governments around the world spend too much money on treating illnesses and diseases and not enough on health education and prevention. Every area of the world has their individual health care policies and different people facing various types of diseases. Today

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estern world spend

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uge amount of money on their citizens but

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very less amount on prevention. It often

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that every problem has its solution in it. The Government can

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definitely

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do various things to solve these types of issues.

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, awareness about healthy lifestyle, Strict rules for product packaging to maintain its category with red, green and black marks. Health education should start from school level so that after few years Authorities will get good results out of it. Majority problems regarding illness

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occured

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due to lack of body fitness & proper knowledge etc.

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, The Government can promote bicycles or walk for short distance

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ar or other vehicles. It will

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olve traffic problem too. They can keen keep eye on agriculture where chemicals are used. A basic reason

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long term diseases like Cancer, Stroke is behind it. Every country

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own reasons like people don't understand, we can't change

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situation due to

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uge population and so on. Best way to solve

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issue is to

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teach people what is

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ealthy lifestyle, prefered food according to their location, importance of fitness, regular time out of

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usy schedule for their own

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wellness. Parents are role models for children once they start everybody start. It is

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understood that some illness arises suddenly without any prior symptoms.

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Awareness

about health, caring, regular body fitness

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exercise

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makes a difference. Though

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overnment can't avoid spends over treatment but

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icture completely.