In some countries, celebrities can now earn more than senior politicians. what might be the reason for this? is this positive or negative development?

Celebrities have reached remarkable net worths and most of them are earning more than politicians who have rich experience

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duties.

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of all, highly recognized people have contributed in some way to the community,

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which is greater than a politician

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dollars by releasing on Netflix documentaries about physics and scientific discoveries. He is heavily investing

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money in

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research efforts to acquire new knowledge about the universe.

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, politicians around the globe have participated in many frauds which have represented more than 100 billion

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dollars. In my opinion, It is a positive development that politics do not produce better profits than other activities because community

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processes need a new approach without intermediaries which means without

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just a middle man role. By electing them, we trust them to make decisions to benefit our common interests,

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they have shown that they pursue their own interests by increasing the size of their wallets.

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, nowadays we have technologies to replace politicians with artificial intelligence services.

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algorithms are able to take our individuals interests and make decisions for the common welfare in a community. By doing

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, we could maximize the social benefit involved in the government budget and we could reach a better life quality. In conclusion, celebrities are making more money than senior politicians, due to the fact that people

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assign more

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to a highly recognized person

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rather than a politician

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. I believe that

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society

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needs to assign less

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duties.