In some countries, celebrities can now earn more than senior politicians. what might be the reason for this? is this positive or negative development?
Celebrities have reached remarkable net worths and most of them are earning more than politicians who have rich experience they have shown that they pursue their own interests by increasing the size of their wallets.
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rather than a politician contribution
. From my point of view, this
is a positive development because the
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society
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that we have assigned to the politicians
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of all, highly recognized people have contributed in some way to the community, in other words
, society
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a value
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money in further
research efforts to acquire new knowledge about the universe. Conversely
, politicians around the globe have participated in many frauds which have represented more than 100 billion of
dollars.
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For instance
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, we could maximize the social benefit involved in the government budget and we could reach a better life quality.
In conclusion, celebrities are making more money than senior politicians, due to the fact that people in general
assign more Add the comma(s)
, in general,
value
to a highly recognized person contribution
rather than a politician contribution
. I believe that this
is a positive development because the
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society
needs to assign less value
to the politicians
duties.Change to a genitive case
politician's
politicians'
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