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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customer travels to large shopping centre and mall to do shopping. Is it a positive or negative development?

#years #shops #customer #centre #mall #development
The field of commerce plays
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rucial role in people's daily life. While the number of
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 and outlets
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sustainable growth, other small
trade
 points have been closing. I believe that
this
 trend has more benefits than demerits and in
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I will provide reasons to support my viewpoint.
Firstly
, the establishment of shopping
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 is beneficial for unemployed ones
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to support the operation of malls dozens of people are required. A case in point would be Mega Center Almaty, where almost
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housand
trade
 specialists found their working place.
Moreover
, these professionals tend to have career growth and higher salaries.
In contrast
, small shops provide only one or two positions and as a rule
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these sellers or cashiers earn less than those who work in malls.
Secondly
, multibrand stores provide a plethora of choices in goods;
consequently
, consumers can choose the best products by relevant price.
For instance
, the majority of Almaty citizens often purchase clothes in Dostyk Plaza, as there provided the best famous brands.
Moreover
, local fashionistas can buy expensive purses by affordable price during the annual sale. To compare, in small shops the variety of goods is very limited and prices are fixed during
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hole year.
Last
 but not least, mall visitors can combine shopping with leisure as each conventional
trade
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 provides endless entertainment options
such
 as restaurants, children playgrounds, cinemas, computer game clubs.
For example
, for me
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the perfect place to spend my weekends is one of the local
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centers
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, as I can buy
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 necessary items and spend
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leasant time with my friends. To conclude, it is irrefutable that having big
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 is advantageous for people.
Therefore
, governments should support and allocate more
such
 places.
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