In the future it may be necessary for us to live on another planets. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now researching planets that could be a possible home, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Living in a different world may be the only way out for humans in the future, as natural resources are constantly disappearing. A group of people really believe that more investments are needed to study the possibilities of human life on other planets. I agree that funding is necessary for

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research on the continuity of human life outside of Earth,

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, the main focus should be on keeping our world healthy. Nowadays, it is considered by some that investing

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in the discovery of a habitable

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is the salvation for humanity and,

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, people will have an escape plan from the earth if any collapse happens.

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means that the main focus of governments should be to raise funds to find any new

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humans in the future. It is clear that an alternative plan to save our species is considered valuable, as the Earth is facing some environmental crises,

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as global warming, large-scale deforestation and fewer fossil fuel reserves.

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, people need a clear and safe way out if our home

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is not going to support human activity in the future.

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, investing more funds in research to find planets where humans can live will cause less investment in how to keep our

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safe and habitable. If the scientists responsible for finding solutions to keep the Earth a sustainable place for people and other species do not receive enough

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to develop and test ideas against the collapse of the Earth, they will not be able to save our home.

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would lead to the death of most people on Earth due to the lack of natural resources,

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as drinking water, breathable air and vegetables.

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in studies to find alternative habitable planets, I believe that more

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should be spent on saving the Earth. In conclusion, increasing the amount of capital invested in discovering habitable planets is not the best alternative. I agree that we need to invest funds in research on how to live outside the globe,

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, the biggest funding should be in studies that help to prevent our world from becoming habitable.

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extraterrestrial colonization
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In the future it may be necessary for us to live on another planets. For this reason, some people believe that we should spend money now researching planets that could be a possible home, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The percentage of overweight children in westrn society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.

To what extent do you agree that the men and women should do the same job as each other.