In many countries, children are engaged paid in some kind of paid work. some people regard this as completely wrong. while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is an irrefutable fact that, in

this

modernized era, numerous children are doing paid

work

in different fields including restaurants, cafes or more.

However

, some masses consider that it is a completely wrong trend for the development of the children while others are saying it is a huge benefit to the youngsters. I staunchly believe that paid

work

is harmful

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the upcoming growth of children. It is rightly said that children gain valuable experience from

this

task. It is undoubtedly true

however

there

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also

a myriad of detrimental factors behind

this

phenomenon. The most prevalent is a bad effect on the growth of the children. It is not a good path for the upcoming future. They do lots of hard

work

in

such

kinds of places including dishes, mopping, cleaning, and so on but

instead

they get lower amounts of money from their honour. Children become

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minded after doing

this

kind of job.

For example

, In China, Chinese students do not have a bright future after doing

this

kind of job in past times. They are unemployed mostly. According to my perception, there are conspicuous detrimental factors regarding

this

paid

work

. The most prevalent one is literacy and unemployment, which have a negative impact on children’s lives. We can see that children attain huge amounts of loss in their higher education. They do not care about their bright future or feel more satisfaction with paid

work

.

Subsequently

, they should choose the right path in life and take higher positions in life after completing their study including

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octor, air force and so on. In the end,indeed, there are huge drawbacks of paid

work

for students. So, they ought to leave

this

wrong path and take a new turning point in their life.