Modern culture around the world have become similar when compared to the past. What are the reasons. Is it a positive development or a negative development, in your opinion.

There is no question that the process of the globalisation has changed
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the traditional features of each
country
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have undergone
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changes owing to modern developments. In my view, these changes are mostly adverse and in
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I'm willing to provide causes of
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trend and reasons to support my opinion. There are certain factors of
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differences
narrowing between nations.
To begin
, it is undeniable that, marketing encourages consumers to utilize the same
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products despite
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their location and cultural preferences. A case in point would be the rapid spread of fast food, people influenced by
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eat hamburgers and sandwiches
instead
of their traditional dishes.
Furthermore
, it became popular to travel abroad, where tourists and citizens of a hosting
country
experience the exchange of customs and traditions.
Last
but not least, nowadays people started to live in nuclear
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families
family
instead
of living in communities.
Therefore
, the older generation can not transfer their customs to the younger one's. In turn to demerits of culture
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I can provide the following arguments. Countries which emulate features of others' are likely to
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their zest and become
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attractive
unattractive
for tourists.
For instance
, India is famous for its rich cultural heritage;
therefore
, travellers from all other the world are dreaming to explore
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recent years,
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ast modern development of the
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the flow of visitors as many of them now choose more authentic places.
Secondly
, the
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disappears
when
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citizens
forget it's culture. National holidays and customs unite people of one
country
as they gathering together to celebrate them. Remembering events which were precursors to
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articular holiday, they rise their sense of patriotism. In conclusion, it is possible to say that marketing, tourism and nuclear families gave birth to cultures identity. In my opinion,
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their uniqueness and patriotism.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural homogenization
  • Globalization
  • Multinational corporations
  • Consumerism
  • Cross-cultural interactions
  • Cultural diversity
  • Communication technologies
  • Cultural imperialism
  • Global community
  • Cultural richness
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