You lost your driving licence and someone found it and sent it back to you. Write a letter to the finder. In your letter -describe why the licence is important to you -ask where he or she found it -offer how would vou like to thank him/her
Dear Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to appreciate your efforts. I have received my driving license that was lost.
Actually, last
week, I went to the shopping mall to purchase some clothes for my sister's wedding. Being an elder daughter of the house, every responsibility was on my shoulders and I was stressed. As a result
, in a shopping mall, when I was moving from one place to another, I lost my driving license.
However
, It is an important document for me because I am a truck driver and I have not been able to go to work since last
week.
In addition
, I was unable to use my car for collecting things for marriage which made it hard for me to complete tasks on proper time. Even though there were other family members to help me, still I felt incomplete.
Moreover
, I want to know whether you found it in a shopping mall or not. Fortunately, I am glad that you sent it to my home and I want to invite you to my house for dinner if you like to come, it would be a great opportunity for me to meet you and thank you.
Lastly
, I am looking forward to meeting you. I am thankful for you again.
Yours Sincerely,
SimranSubmitted by simranjot0002 on
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coherence and cohesion
Consider avoiding repetition to make your writing more concise. For example, instead of "the shopping mall" twice, you could say "there" in the second sentence.
coherence and cohesion
Use transitions more effectively between paragraphs to enhance the flow of your letter.
task achievement
Your letter is polite and expresses gratitude appropriately, which is suitable for the context.
coherence and cohesion
You have effectively structured your letter with a clear beginning, middle, and end.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.