In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

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An increasing number of holidaymakers in the future will decide to travel domestically rather than flying out to foreign nations. I completely agree with

this

because the prolonged pandemic will continue to deter people from travelling abroad and domestic tourism will be much more affordable. In the future, people may have no other choice but to spend their holidays in their own countries as borders are closed due to the pandemic outbreak. In order to spare

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ives of their own people, governments have either banned tourists or imposed strict health check-up regulations to ensure that their nations are immune from the virus.

In other words

, it is unduly difficult to enter a foreign nation and

this

forces travellers to alter their holiday plans and destination to their regions.

For instance

, most governments require at least two weeks of quarantine upon arrival which is even longer than the travellers' stay.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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domestic tourism
international travel
cultural exchange
national pride
affordability
convenience
ecotourism
heritage sites
local businesses
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