Should the international community do more to tackle the threat of global warming?

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International community is doing lots of things to solve global warming issue. It is a type of continue process since
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ew decades. Western countries along with
third
world
trying hard to resolve
this
problem. There is no doubt that it is
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lobal threat and make
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uge impact on
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ntire population. In my opinion, Yes! There is no area left on which is not affected by
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issue.
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ntensity
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according to demographical conditions. Everybody is
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hitting
hard due to serious situation
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occurred
occurs
.
For instance
, Wild-life, Weather conditions,
tempature
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temperature
and so on.It is basically
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roblem of Carbon production which is now
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. After
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ndustrial revolution factory
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goods large scale started. A complicated production process required lost of chemical processing which
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carbon and mix components. Due to global warming large population faces problems like Tsunami, Climate change, Life
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institution
instruction
, scarcity of resources, raise in earth
temparature
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temperature
and ice mountain melting.
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community does a great job to give some amount of relief to decrease a Co2 and its component production. There are few agreements signed by various countries in the
world
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erious concern about air quality and
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temperature
improvement. Western countries stoped
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electronic products which produce heat and green gasses. More or less, every western country is taking
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share along with responsibility. Paris agreement is one of the best
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example
of it where
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ich
world
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and encourage poor countries to achieve
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arget.
Absolutly
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Absolutely
, global warming is a collective responsibility and it needs
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teamwork.
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and
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nternational monitory fund should promote incentives schemes
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enalty for agreement
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violation
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Further
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reat help from top G-20 countries to
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tackle
this
situation.
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honest try and commitment can change
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omplete picture.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global warming
  • threat
  • international community
  • tackle
  • pressing issue
  • global collaboration
  • action
  • cooperation
  • root causes
  • neglecting
  • responsibility
  • catastrophic consequences
  • efforts
  • combat
  • inspiration
  • further action
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