Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Now a days
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, The percentage of
crime
is
increse
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increase
increased
day by day which create big debate among the people. Some people think that capital
punishment
should not be used for
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riminal while others argue that
punishment
should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
To begin
with, Capital
punishment
should be given because
punishment
to the criminal
give
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fair judgement to
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ictim.
In addition
to
this
, it helps to reduce the
crime
rate.
Punishment
for
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rime set
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example to other people, which helps to
decrese
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decrease
the
crime
rates. For an instance, In Dubai,
stricts
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strict
punishment
is given to the person who
commit
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the
crime
and because of
this
rule
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,
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thier
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their
crime
rate is less than 20%. In my opinion,
punishment
is
necessory
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necessary
for the criminal who
commit
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the
crime
.
On the other hand
, Capital
punishment
create
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many negative effects
in
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human
behavior
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. Many time
person
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people
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commit
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crime
due to some disabilities or to save itself from the criminal. So giving capital
punishment
is not fair for people who
crime
by mistake to save themselves. There are many other options
instade
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instead
of
punishment
like work in
oldage
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old age
home and help them or work for NGO which give chance to change themselves. In a nutshell, In my opinion
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punishment
should
be allow
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be allowed
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because it
give
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judgement to the
victime
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victim
victims
as well as it helps to
decrese
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decrease
the
crime
rate.
Hence
, capital
punishment
should be allowed who commit the
crime
.
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