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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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Outfit of an individual can develop an initial image of a
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, few individuals believe that a
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’s character and culture can be judged based on their attire. I do not agree with
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election is majorly influenced based on the affordability and the theme of the
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. Every individual would purchase an outfit
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 to their level of income. Due to limitation of budget, a
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 may not be able to afford fashionable wears, but it does not mean that he is not fashionable.
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, a
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 may be rich and can wear branded clothes but it does not determine his culture and character.
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, some employees may not be able to buy an expensive suit which does not determine whether they are professional or not.
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, the selection is largely based on the earnings of a
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. Most of the time, the decision to wear a certain outfit depend on the type of
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 a
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 is attending. Party would require flashy dressing whereas the funeral may require simple and light colour clothes.
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, in the case of a religious
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, all the attendees choose to wear traditional clothes.
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 does not mean that all the attendees are spiritual and religious.
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, many times dressing is influenced by the
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 an individual is attending. To conclude, the choice of a
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 to wear an outfit depends on factors like his affordability and occasion.
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, it is not possible for people to judge a
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’s culture and character based on their outfits.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • garments
  • traditional attire
  • sartorial choices
  • expressive style
  • cultural identity
  • psychological implications
  • non-verbal cues
  • globalization
  • perceptions
  • professional demeanor
  • societal norms
  • economic constraints
  • subcultures
  • fashion movements
  • individualism
  • stereotype
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