Some people think the government should spend money on faster means of public transport. However, others think money should be spent on other aspects of public transport such as cost and environment. Discuss both view and give your opinion?
Some people think the government should spend money on faster means of public
transport
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However
, others think money should be spent on other aspects of public Linking Words
transport
Use synonyms
such
as cost and environment. Discuss both Linking Words
view
and give your opinion?
In today’s world, Change to a plural noun
views
traffic
problems have always attracted a great deal of attention from the public. While some argue that public transports should be re-engineered to travel at greater speed, it is my firm conviction that the idea of other more pressing aspects Use synonyms
such
as their fares or environmental responsibility being prioritized is more favourable.
It is understandable why some focus on the speed of Linking Words
such
public means of Linking Words
transport
. The Use synonyms
first
reason is that a boost of velocity made for Linking Words
such
vehicles would result in improved connectivity between urban and rural areas, which may lead to more occupational opportunities for rural inhabitants. Since the commuting time is greatly reduced, they are more motivated to seek jobs in nearby cities. Linking Words
Moreover
, given the exponential rate of urbanization, the conditions of existing Linking Words
traffic
infrastructures may Use synonyms
proves
themselves to be inadequate for accommodating Change the verb form
prove
such
expansion. In fact, roads, especially in developing countries, are generally narrow, which directs the public to blame the bulkiness of public transports for Linking Words
traffic
congestion. Use synonyms
Therefore
, an effective solution to Linking Words
such
impediment seems to be that these means of Linking Words
transport
being upgraded to move at a greater pace in order to free public space of Use synonyms
further
breakdowns.
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However
, I believe that the national budget should be spent on reducing the fares and environmental impacts of public transports due to their long-term benefits. If the cost of travelling by Linking Words
such
vehicles is substantially or totally covered by the states, citizens will probably feel more encouraged to adopt a habit of using public transports. Linking Words
This
would result in not only personal lifestyle lift, but Linking Words
also
an improved state of Linking Words
traffic
as a whole. An increase in the number of people using buses or trains as their prime means of transports will lead to more Use synonyms
traffic
space being optimized. Use synonyms
Moreover
, since urban planners have recently been in favour of sustainable development given the context of pollution, reducing the impact of public transports on the environment is a Linking Words
timely
adjustment. Replace the word
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However
, Linking Words
this
suggestion would not be made possible if some drawbacks characterized by clean energy Linking Words
such
as inconsistency and intermittence are not addressed. Linking Words
Therefore
, the government should allocate subsidies to make renewable energy reliable enough to power public vehicles and Linking Words
thus
reduce exhaust fumes released into the atmosphere.
In conclusion, there are still some justifications for spending public funding on maximizing the speed of public transports; Linking Words
however
, I am more inclined to the idea suggesting that Linking Words
such
money be channelled to cutting down the fees and reducing the adverse impacts on the air quality of Linking Words
such
means of transports.Linking Words
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