Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?
Governments have preserved artforms become travellers prefer visiting a
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remendous responsibility towards spending money on maintaining and developing their regions. It is frequently argued that allocating budget for arts is not required and it should be used on other programs. I disagree with that statement as the culture of a Add an article
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nation
is preserved in forms of arts and promoting art
results in tourism which benefits the government
and local businesses.
Firstly
, the art
of any nation
marvellously captures the essence of ancestral craftsmanship. WellAdd the punctuation
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eritage for the current generation. Add an article
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For instance
, in India, villages in the remote state of Gujarat are famous for mandala paintings. This
style of painting has received praises from the globe. Mandala a patterned painting has been dated back from 10th century BC and has been passed through generations. The Gujarat government
has taken all efforts for preserving the craft like providing government
jobs or subsidiaries on food as well as aid during droughts in summers.
Secondly
, tourists are attracted towards
places that are vibrant and mesmerising for them. There are small businesses that thrive on Verify preposition usage
to
such
tourists like
artists, museums, hotels, vehicle rentals etc. In a Verify preposition usage
as
traveling
survey, by travel guide magazine, 78%Change the spelling
travelling
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of
nation
or place that was well maintained for art
and visited a local museum to see the history of that place. In my experience, an art
festival hosted by Maharashtra government
allured me to see the craftsmanship of a statue of Chatrapati Shivaji Maharaj in Kolhapur district with a bare mount
of entry fees of 100 Rs. It was 20 feet tall and the carving was so perfect it seems like the statue was alive. With 1,00,000 visitors from all over the place. Correct your spelling
amount
This
money is used to support local business and They constantly repairs
the wear and tear of the statue preventing it for any deformity.
To summarize, Change the verb form
repair
art
is one of the most prized possessions of a nation
and the government
spends capital to maintain them. Well preserved or encouraging activities in the field of art
yields good returns. It is critical for the government
to spent
money on Change the form of the verb
spend
art
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite