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Almost every successful company is using advertisements to increase their sales. What features make an advertisement effective? Is advertising good or bad for the society?

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Nowadays, companies have adopted advertisements as their primary marketing
strategy
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 to
increase
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 their
profit
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margin
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.
Although
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, advertisements help to create
awareness
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 among people, in my
view
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,
quality
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 the
quality
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 of the
product
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 can solely help the
product
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 to
gain
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popularity
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. Nowadays, companies have adopted advertisements as their primary marketing
strategy
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 to
increase
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 their
profit
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margin
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.
Although
Linking Words
, advertisements help to create
awareness
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 among people, in my
view
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,
quality
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 the
quality
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 of the
product
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 can solely help the
product
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 to
gain
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popularity
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.Nowadays, companies have adopted advertisements as their primary marketing
strategy
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 to
increase
Use synonyms
 their
profit
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margin
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.
Although
Linking Words
, advertisements help to create
awareness
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 among people, in my
view
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,
quality
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 the
quality
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 of the
product
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 can solely help the
product
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 to
gain
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popularity
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. Nowadays, companies have adopted advertisements as their primary marketing
strategy
Use synonyms
 to
increase
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 their
profit
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margin
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.
Although
Linking Words
, advertisements help to create
awareness
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 among people, in my
view
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,
quality
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 the
quality
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 of the
product
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 can solely help the
product
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 to
gain
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popularity
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.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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