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Is freedom of speech necessary in a democratic society to what extent you agree or disagree ?

#freedom #speech #society
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It cannot be denied that freedom is an integral part of the individual's life .it is a fundamental
right
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 of them so they have the
right
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 to
speech
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 in a democratic society. I partially agree with
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 statement I will delay my point in upcoming paragraphs before reach the conclusion.
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 with ,a democratic society always made by the people of every
country
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 individuals make
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 Society for their benefits .
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 when democratic society is selected by people
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 people should have
right
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 to speak freely when they will feel trouble related to rules and laws, which is made by the government. there are many countries where people can speak for their rights like as ,India ,UK ,USA ,Canada . these countries individual can talk with their leaders when they face any kind of problems which can be related to their personal things .
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 as, money, property. sometimes the government try to Hire personal properties of the individuals ,without discussion with them that time they can raise their voice against the Authority.
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, persons have a
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 to speak freely because they are living in freedom era.
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 people should never give a
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 on those topics which can be cause harm to people life
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, some time people give a
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 on
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 topics which could increase the violence and ratios between the
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 and Society people. does many countries are not allowed
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right
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 to their
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 individual
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 as Russia Japan Korea and so on
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onclusion of freedom of
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 is necessary for everyone,
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 ,people should keep in mind the rules and laws of their
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Freedom of speech
  • Democratic society
  • Marketplace of ideas
  • Dissenting opinions
  • Social progress
  • Innovation
  • Government accountability
  • Transparency
  • Good governance
  • Cultural development
  • Personal freedom
  • Self-realization
  • Public debate
  • Human rights
  • Liberties
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