Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Arts is considered to be a leisure activity by many

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but has

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great potential as a profession and culture.

This

industry is not stable, and

thus

government intervention is necessary. Music, dance, and other

such

activities are not standardised and paid as jobs

such

as in banking or hospitality. It is because of the reason that it is more related to the skill and expertise in performance which is very volatile to be judged. While some pieces of

art

my fetch millions, others may fail to even get

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ew hundreds. There are many examples where

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like Shahrukh Khan who earn endless wealth, and on

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contrast, many artists lead a miserable life. To many, it is not even a job. Even today parents desire their children to become a doctor, engineer, or architect, but not as a performer, actor or a model. The reason behind

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thinking is that

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they do not consider it as a serious work, and can be undertaken without much

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.

However

,

art

holds a lot of importance in our culture,

relegion

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religion

, and country. There are many museums built to protect the

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. Archaeologists study

such

creations and try to know about

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history. Most of the holy places display the

paintaings

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paintings

painting

of god and kindness. There are many

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of

such

importance of

art

forms that it can not be ignored.

On the contrary

,

this

industry is not that strong as other lines of businesses. If the workers and their skill is not acknowledged and paid reasonably, it will diminish and even vanish over a period of time. Many forms of

art

have been lost as there was nobody to pay heed to it.

Therefore

, even if the critics suggest that it is a waste of money to help artists, theatre and related subjects must be promoted to keep people motivated, and pass on the legacy to others to follow.

Art

is not only a display

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but a part of our society and culture. To summarise, there is no standardised value of

art

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and the human resource in

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industry face volatility. It is an important part of our life

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and needs to be supported in order to protect its various forms.

Hence

, it is

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governments

government's

government

moral duty to protect the fate of

such

workforce with induced funds.