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Many people argue that it is good idea to investing more money in the field of arts by the government . However , other believe that centre should spent this currency on betterment of health and education sector . This essay will discuss both side of views

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etterment of
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ealth and
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 of views and why
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 on
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ation with their cultural aspects .
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cultural rituals
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lack of learning and a nation
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grow .
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iggest reason behind USA economical growth is
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ndividual
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 healthy and educated . Because
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nowledge and better
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ation helps to raise the country growth.
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