Government investment in arts, such as music and theater, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or dis agree?

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ndian government is allotting some share of profit to the arts and

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is common in all the countries. Some

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that it is of no use to spend on arts

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as

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and

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. I don't agree with

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argument, I feel that

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and

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is

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a representation of one's

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and heritage and

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it should be preserved. It is obvious that we need to invest more on

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public services

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as increasing the number of schools, building more public toilets, building more hospitals and more.

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, we should not avoid

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our arts.

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, if we failed to support the arts and

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development department with adequate funds, it will result in the decreasing in tourist attraction to our country and a job loss of 15% of our population. I will explain how.

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, In countries like our India, arts and

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attracts 60% of tourists than the other things. Foreigners

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to visit places like taj mahal,

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palace and most

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temples, which is

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a form of arts. Those historical monuments should be preserved. Adequate funds to corresponding departments will lead to safely preserve it.

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, As per

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ourism department data, tourism accounts for 15% formal and 10% informal jobs in our country. Consider a business,

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and oven sarees in south India. The hand owen clothes which has

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igh demand

on

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foreign nationals

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as America,

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, UK and

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. Though they don't wear it often, they are fond of wearing and flaunting it. Sales of

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types of dress materials

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for 5% of

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south India's turn over, the Arts and

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department is procuring them directly from the

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at a supporting price and selling it in the foreign markets through embassy and E-portals. Indian

music

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especially

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music

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draws many

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foreigners

towards India. They like to listen

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the classical form of

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very much.

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in India are the most loved

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entertainment

by 75% of the Indian middle class. Though we can hear many fils earning in crores it doesn't fill the pockets all

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the artists. Only producers, distributors and some lead artists are

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from these fils. The

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of India is supporting those artists by providing pensions. If we stop funding to

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and arts, we will loose our classical

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and

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, resulting in job losses and tourism revenue. To conclude my point, Though public services

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to be funded more, we cannot stop funding for

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and

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of arts. ther reflect our

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and heritage. In our system

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we value arts as equal to gods and we should not forget the revenue associated with it. We can use the revenue for spending on public service.