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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language. State which you consider to be the most effective. studying on your own taking lessons with a private tutor taking lessons as part of a class taking lessons online going to live in a country where the language is spoken

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In the modernized era, the increment in the number of languages is the major benefit across the nations. With each passing day, people spend
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time while dealing with foreign people really made their lives complicated, there is enough chance of improvement. Significant numbers of citizens do react differently because of ample misunderstanding. The present essay will discuss the topic in a broader manner.
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, every language holds an important cultural value. Taking lessons inline is used widely in most countries now, and they are a sign of improvement. There are various ways to do
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, studying on your own, private tutor, online etc. But undoubtedly, one of the benefits of online classes is that they are less stressful than ever.
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 , there is a rise or fall in available hours. Availability of resources is another area where governments and private groups or individuals can share responsibility. People are more likely to suffer
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inance issue at a great level. Since developed nations have always been far ahead in terms of learning other languages, and are in fact mostly to get credit for it.
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, India people spend more time in learning English. Studying your own required lots of patience, and
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rivate tutor is an expensive option. In conclusion, even though time changes. while people may vary in their opinions. I think only positive elements can bring more benefits.
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equirements done quickly.
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ost effective way to learn.
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