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These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In recent years there is a huge change in people thoughts by settling down abroad with their loved ones. There are multiple reason and takeaways behind
this
 which I will discuss in the latter view with suitable examples. In the
first
 place, many people argue that in developed countries there are proper facilities provided by the government which makes their standard of living much better in their daily life. Germany is the great evidence in front of our eyes where the government are providing free education and health facilities which supports middle-class families to move forward for a better future.
Moreover
, they get a chance to explore the native culture and different kind of mindsets. It makes them much wiser and generates confidence for their future endeavours.
However
, the majority of people believe that it is difficult for an outsider to settle down in other countries due to their contradict lifestyle and some time they have to face racial or religious discrimination in the unfamiliar atmosphere.
For example
 recently in America a black guy brutely killed by a bunch of policemen for skin colour while he was begging for his life,
this
 leads to massive protest and anger by the public in the hole country.
In addition
, language is the huge barrier mostly in front of students where they feel little insecure and sometime it may lead to depression or affect mental health. So at
last
, both the points have positive and negative aspects to live and work in a foreign country, but when we look for a broader picture we get to know its individual choice to choose his way of living and every person knows what is good for them.
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