some people believe that mobile phone conversations should be banned in crowded and social places,while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Thanks to advanced technology, communication has become easier than ever. People have a myriad of views about mobile

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use and some of them believe that mobile

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conversations should be banned in

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rowded and social area. I personally disagree with it and talking on

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hone in public places should not be banned. Among all the reasons why conversation over

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hone should not be banned in social places, probably the most significant one is that many people prefer direct conversation via

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in case of serious or urgent issues. Nowadays, online communication including text messages, emails and voice messages are prevalent and it allows people to keep in touch all the time despite

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geographical and time restraints. When people discuss

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urgent issues, talking on the

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allows instant response and reduces misunderstanding of

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one of texts, say hospital calls about relatives' injury. Another point to note is that it is common for people to be

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by for their work after their work time.

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, doctors, nurses and firefighters may need to be '

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mergency. It is vital for them to pick up

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all as it can be about life-and-deaths issues. Never should we overlook the fact that prohibiting mobile

phone

conversations is against our principle of freedom. The choice of how to use an electronic appliance should be free from any constraints. While modern societies always promote freedom of choices, banning

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obile

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in public is violating the concept. To solve the negative effects brought by talking on

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hone in public,

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overnment should tackle the root cause by enhancing education to the public on using their gadgets in a considerable way, ranging from

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talking loudly on

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to switching their

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on silence mode. Fines can be issued to deter disturbing

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too. Under

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line of thinking, I believe that banning people from mobile

phone

conversation is not feasible.

However

, through education and setting up laws, the drawbacks can be minimised.