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University education should be free for all students. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Education
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 plays a vital role in our lives and it will support the country’s economy. Nowadays many countries offering free higher
education
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 for promoting
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 for culture and
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 encourage their citizens to get professional qualifications. I completely agree with the above statement.
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 with, there are many people who have the potential to do something for their country but they cannot afford their university fees.
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, they study a simple
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 or leave their studies.
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, the country lost their
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 who can do something for their country but due to expensive higher
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 pupils left their studies to support their family.
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, according to the survey of Cambridge University 40 per cent students of Pakistan are not getting university
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 because of high fees.
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, due to the lack of professional
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 the country’s economy suffers. The government have higher people from other countries on huge salaries.
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, many countries offering free educations and encourage their citizens to get quality of
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 and support and work for their countries.
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, some countries are offering special training and universities degrees to international students to collect international
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 and
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 give them job offers which give a huge advantage to the authorities and individuals as well in term of higher-good
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 and handsome salaries.
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, China offers free medical
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 to international pupils and after completing
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 offer a good job as well. To conclude,
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 is an important thing which is very helpful to boost economic growth and individuals
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 get many benefits from
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. A free educational program produces more
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 who are improving their reputation in the world.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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