More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that increasing the price of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days youngsters

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to overcome numerous problems at home and at schools. There are various factors which give rise to these troubles, but it can be easily tackled if effective steps are taken by guardians. The predominant reason for increasing difficulties among juvenile is

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eer pressure of performing well in exams. Competition is increasing at

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alarming rate, teachers often compare the performance of one student with another due to which pupils are in the pressure of doing well in schools and exam. Every person is unique in itself and

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different skill and talent, so comparing everyone on same parameters is not a wise step. The detrimental effects of

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pressure can be easily noted by seeing the accelerating rate of suicides among students if they fail or

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xam. Apart from

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, nowadays every

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want their

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to become engineer or doctor so they force them to choose difficult optional subjects, without thinking about their area of interest which have

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dverse effect on

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moral and ultimately there is

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ecrease in confidence. As every key has lock

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ame is with

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problem, parents can definitely help the

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negative situations. As every person enjoys his or her freedom same is with young children they should be given the freedom to choose the subject of their own choice.

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liberty will help them to elevate in life and succeed in

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hosen field.

In addition

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, will power to except failure can

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be cultivated among children. They should be taught that it is not essential to succeed in each and

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, but

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esson learned from failure can

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lead to

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success. Parents must tell the

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that fighting for success is more vital rather than succeeding in every step of life.

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will lead them to come out of any difficult situation. In conclusion, unequivocally these days juvenile has to face various problems not only at school but

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guardians can definitely guide the

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and overcome their trouble by showing

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ight path