Nowadays people are working too hard,what is the reason for that. what should employers do to prevent people form this.

As the author mentioned before, There are a whole host of companies that are doing
this
kind of personalization. Neither them nor us could not guess what will appear
as a result
of
this
. I totally agree with that view and
this
essay will clarify the main points of my view and will brighten the main reasons.
First
things
first
, In order to understand and support the author's view, I would like to explain my reasons and examples.
Firstly
, as the author mentioned before, awareness of the filtering and incontrollable personalizing could cause various consequences that are considered dangerous.
For example
, if you take all of these filters together, you take all these algorithms, you get what we call a filter bubble. And your filter bubble is your own personal, unique universe of information that you live online. But the thing is you do not decide anything on
this
personal universe.
Furthermore
, they want you to feel like you are in charge and controlling everything in your browser but of course, the truth is the opposite of
this
. You are nothing but a rat
that is
designing its own labyrinth. What
this
suggests is actually that we may have the story about the Internet wrong. What we need is to make sure that these algorithms have encoded in them a sense of public life, a sense of civic responsibility.
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