Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Other, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Children are believed by a growing number of people to be trained and learnt about social behaviours as a

member

of

society

while others think that

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chool is a place where children should be taught

such

manners. Even though both the educational system and families are responsible for training youngs in order to be better members of

society

,families play more important. Academic environments are places which are instituted for the aim of educating young children about different subjects ranging from maths to life skills which include the way of being an effective

member

of

society

.Lots of professional teachers who are specifically trained to guide pupils are available at schools and they know how to treat them to achieve the best result.

Moreover

,since children spend a huge amount of time with their peers,they can practice their role as a

member

of

society

and boost their social skills due to being a good

member

of

society

.

Therefore

,interacting with both school teachers and other children is beneficial for youngs to exercise their social skills and act better in large groups. Despite the vital role schools play in instructing young learners,parents can influence them more deeply.From the psychological point of view,as family members are

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kids make their initial interaction with them

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early ages,they are highly likely to form more than 70% per cent of their personalities.

In other words

,main personality features which include the way people behave in

society

are formed their

first

3 years of living.

For instance

,If a child was not told not to throw garbage away in the street,he would unlikely to obey

this

unwritten rule as a

member

of

society

.

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in my opinion,parents are more responsible for their children’s upbringing more than anyone else. To conclude,both parents and schools can affect

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hild’s social

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Although

schools educate youngs to behave better in

society

,I believe families’ role is more vital.