The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The design below is an Australian University's
student
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room
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. Now,let's talk about the
room
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. The
first
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room
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is a
student
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room
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for
two
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people. The rental fees for
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room
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are 350 dollars per week. When we enter the door we can see there is a bed and study desk for one
student
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.
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, we can see that they use
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cupboards to separate
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spaces for anther students. The
room
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includes a bathroom on the left hand of the door and a round table with chairs on the right-hand side. Addition, there is a bookshelf to isolate the bathroom and students life area .
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, we can see there is a small " kitchen" for
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students to use. The whole area for the
room
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is 24m^2, the width is 4meters and the length is 6 metres. The
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room
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in the bottom is the
student
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room
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for one person. The rental fee for
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single
room
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is 200 dollars per week. The
room
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width is 2.5metres and length is the same as the
student
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room
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for
two
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people.The
room
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includes a bathroom ,study desk ,bed , a television and a small kitchen. Overall,
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is rooms basic situation.
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these rooms are not big it is a good boarding
room
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for the students.
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