The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The design below is an Australian University's
student
room
. Now,let's talk about the
room
. The
first
room
is a
student
room
for
two
people. The rental fees for
this
room
are 350 dollars per week. When we enter the door we can see there is a bed and study desk for one
student
.
Then
, we can see that they use
two
cupboards to separate
two
spaces for anther students. The
room
includes a bathroom on the left hand of the door and a round table with chairs on the right-hand side. Addition, there is a bookshelf to isolate the bathroom and students life area .
Finally
, we can see there is a small " kitchen" for
two
students to use. The whole area for the
room
is 24m^2, the width is 4meters and the length is 6 metres. The
second
room
in the bottom is the
student
room
for one person. The rental fee for
this
single
room
is 200 dollars per week. The
room
width is 2.5metres and length is the same as the
student
room
for
two
people.The
room
includes a bathroom ,study desk ,bed , a television and a small kitchen. Overall,
this
is rooms basic situation.
Although
these rooms are not big it is a good boarding
room
for the students.
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