As a result of growth in some urban centers, the environment in those cities is deteriorating. How could this issue be tackled by both the government and individuals?

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problems are worsening in many cities due to the progress. In my opinion

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matter could be resolved with the combine efforts of both the authorities and individuals.

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nvironment problem is perhaps the biggest problem world is facing today. To illustrate, the present era is ‘The era of industrial growth and technological advancement’. Though

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growth and new technology

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making, our life easier and more productive to individuals

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is harmful

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the

environment

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beautiful globe.

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factories are producing different kinds of products like cloth, tiles etc to

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the need of society but are

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causing dame to rivers and earth in the form of industrial waste which

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different type of hazardous chemicals. Protecting

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nvironment is the duty of authorities as well as of individuals.

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both should play an active role for

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noble cause.

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can make strict rules to protect our surrounding and people and factories that disobey these rules,

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overnment should charge fine from them. There must be

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rovision of imprisonment for

law breakers

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. Individuals should keep their surrounding neat and clean and should

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grow plant trees. They should avoid the use of personal vehicles for those journeys where public transport is easily available. In

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there is no reverse gear on the path on which

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civilization has moved

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there are some steps that can be taken to minimize the threat to

environment

and involvement of both government and individuals is must for it.