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As a result of growth in some urban centers, the environment in those cities is deteriorating. How could this issue be tackled by both the government and individuals?

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It is an undeniable fact that
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 the environmental problems are worsening in many cities due to the progress. In my opinion
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this
 matter could be resolved with the combine efforts of both the authorities and individuals.
This
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nvironment problem is perhaps the biggest problem world is facing today. To illustrate, the present era is ‘The era of industrial growth and technological advancement’. Though
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 growth and new technology are making, our life easier and more productive to individuals
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 is harmful to the climate of
this
 beautiful globe.
For example
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however
, factories are producing different kinds of products like cloth, tiles etc to fulfil the need of society but are
also
 causing dame to rivers and earth in the form of industrial waste which includes different type of hazardous chemicals. Protecting the environment is the duty of authorities as well as of individuals.
Hence
 both should play an active role for
this
 noble cause. The Government can make strict rules to protect our surrounding and people and factories that disobey these rules, the government should charge fine from them. There must be
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rovision of imprisonment for lawbreakers. Individuals should keep their surrounding neat and clean and should
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 grow plant trees. They should avoid the use of personal vehicles for those journeys where public transport is easily available. In nutshell,
although
 there is no reverse gear on the path on which
this
 civilization has moved
however
 there are some steps that can be taken to minimize the threat to surroundings and involvement of both government and individuals is must for it.
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