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Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many educational specialists suppose that it is obligatory for children to have music literacy and to play a musical
instrument
.
This
 essay totally agrees with that statement. I believe, that a process of playing an
instrument
 would help kids both to
control
 their nervous system and to develop long-term memory. Many young children often suffer from their parents’ thorough
control
 or worrying about school grades and performance;
however
, the hobby as playing a
music
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instrument
 is able to minimize stress and improve the state of kid’s nervous system. While playing an
instrument
 a child is focusing on a surrounding produced by a musical atmosphere
that is
 diverting him from any other thoughts. By playing an
instrument
 child constantly keeps his or her breath under
control
 as well as actions. That all influences kids’ calmness and composure. To illustrate, the
worldwidely
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 famous pianist Sergei Rachmaninoff consistently had amazed his classmates and teachers with his ability not to get angry in any cases.
In addition
, the process of playing a musical
instrument
 has an impact on the development of
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id’s memory. Vibrations of sounds affect the speed of spreading neuro signals, which lead to
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 increase in brain activity. To support the idea, the Russian national annual survey organized by
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inistry of education has revealed, that about one
third
 of children who have ever wined tournaments in oral counting, have a
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 hobby. To conclude, the skill of playing a musical
instrument
 definitely has
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 crucial impact on children’s state, influencing their calmness
control
 as well as their memory development.
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