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The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#media #interaction #people #society
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eveloping world,
technology
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influential
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nfluencial role in people life. Some people think that new
technology
 like social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among the people while other people think that it has
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reat advantage in their life. I think there
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 more advantage
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overweigh disadvantage for the following reasons.
Firstly
,
technology
 like social media play important role in person who
live
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 away from their family for
work
 or
study
. people who go overseas for
study
 can keep in touch with each other. They can talk
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each other which will reduce the lonely
fellings
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feelings
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.
In addition
 to
this
, people can
study
 at
home
, they attend class online which help many people who
work
 as well as
study
.
Furthermore
,
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nline application helps in business,
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erson can
work
 at
home
,
also
 attend
metting
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meeting
meetings
 with the help of some app like Zoom, Goggle meeting and many other. For
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example, many people who
works
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 in IT can do their
work
 from
home
 due to
this
 developing
technology
. On other hand, though social media has many positive impacts, it
have
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 some risk and disadvantage
also
. There is
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isk of
cyber crime
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cybercrime
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, some people misuse
this
 facility, they steal data as well as some personal information and use
this
 for
balckmaling
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blackmailing
 which ruin some people
life
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.
Also
, many people use
this
technology
 by creating
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ake profile to cheat other people and hurt their
fellings
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feelings
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. Since
,
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this
technology
 helps
to
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people communicate with each other people do not get that joy which they fells when they personally meet.
Fo
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 an instance, my cousin brother who live in
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K, he always
talk
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 with friends and family but he fell isolated when he
come
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his real place. To sum up,
technology
have
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 more advantage like people can talk with each other even though they live far away from their
home
, it
heps
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helps
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 student to attend online classes. It
also
 helps in many
business
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businesses
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 where people can
atttend
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attend
mettings
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meetings
 with many
app
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apps
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.
Hence
, there are more
positve
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positive
 than negative effects of social media.
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