The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In

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eveloping world,

technology

play

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influential

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nfluencial role in people life. Some people think that new

technology

like social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among the people while other people think that it has

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reat advantage in their life. I think there

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more advantage

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overweigh disadvantage for the following reasons.

Firstly

,

technology

like social media play important role in person who

live

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away from their family for

work

or

study

. people who go overseas for

study

can keep in touch with each other. They can talk

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each other which will reduce the lonely

fellings

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feelings

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.

In addition

to

this

, people can

study

at

home

, they attend class online which help many people who

work

as well as

study

.

Furthermore

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nline application helps in business,

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erson can

work

at

home

,

also

attend

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meeting

meetings

with the help of some app like Zoom, Goggle meeting and many other. For

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example, many people who

works

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in IT can do their

work

from

home

due to

this

developing

technology

. On other hand, though social media has many positive impacts, it

have

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some risk and disadvantage

also

. There is

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isk of

cyber crime

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cybercrime

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, some people misuse

this

facility, they steal data as well as some personal information and use

this

for

balckmaling

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blackmailing

which ruin some people

life

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.

Also

, many people use

this

technology

by creating

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ake profile to cheat other people and hurt their

fellings

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feelings

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. Since

,

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this

technology

helps

to

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people communicate with each other people do not get that joy which they fells when they personally meet.

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an instance, my cousin brother who live in

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K, he always

talk

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with friends and family but he fell isolated when he

come

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his real place. To sum up,

technology

have

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more advantage like people can talk with each other even though they live far away from their

home

, it

heps

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helps

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student to attend online classes. It

also

helps in many

business

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businesses

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where people can

atttend

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attend

mettings

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meetings

with many

app

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apps

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.

Hence

, there are more

positve

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positive

than negative effects of social media.