Some people think that people in senior positions alone should make decisions in a business, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In
this
modern era, proper
decision
making skill is important for
the
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successful
business
. Some people believe that
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op position's people have to take all the
decision
in the
business
while others do not.
This
essay will discuss both sides of the argument in details and provide evidence as to why employees suggestion is superior in the
decision
making
process
.
To begin
with, high position people have
a
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excellent field experience.
Firstly
, they know the company's financial situation perfectly than others.
Secondly
, proper action can be taken by them because of
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enough experience.
For example
,
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oca-cola company achieve lots of success only because of the high authority's right action in the market. Mainly, trust can be developed by the boss in the market with the help of
this
.
Somethimes
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Sometimes
, it
also
creates
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egative impact on the
business
and it
is directly affects
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to the company's profit ratio.
On the contrary
, there are many merits, if boss involve workers in the action making
process
and they can
also
feel that they are the part of it.
As a result
of
this
,
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usiness can easily grow more in less time. If the government will encourage every owner for
this
then
it will be profitable for everyone.
For example
, Lots of small
business
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really good with the
involment
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involvement
of workers in the
business
model. Apart from
this
, if workers will be
the
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part of
this
process
then
thay
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they
that
will perform their best. Summing up,
this
essay discussed how employee's
involment
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involvement
in
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decision making
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process
plays
p
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ositive role in the
business
. I personally,
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hing that it is beneficial for the organization as well as for the country.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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