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In spite ofs advance made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

In today's world,
although
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 agriculture has optimized, many people still get enough
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 in need, especially in
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thrid
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 world's countries. In
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 essay, I will discuss the reason for
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 cause and provide some probably solutions. Nowadays, we have many natural resources,
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 as
water
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,
food
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 and so on.
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, there are
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 have many people who are from the
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 world's countries do not have
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 ability to buy foods and do not have clean
water
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.
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, there are many people who live in undeveloped countries cannot buy some
food
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.
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 is because they do not have much money to pay for daily expenses.
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, they might have a meal once a week.
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, in the undeveloped counties, the governments
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 do not have strong finance, so that they cannot create a
water
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system
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 to filter
water
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.
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 cause citizens
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o not have drinkable
water
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. In the long run, the citizens who live in those cities might undernutrition.
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, there are some solutions by giving a hand to those countries,
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 as to donate
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 and build a
water
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 filtration
system
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 for them.
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, there are some
food
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 banks to help people who cannot gain enough foods.
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, we can donate our
food
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 to
food
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 banks.
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,
food
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 banks can provide fresh and eatable foods to them.
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, the government from well-developed countries can allocate some money to help them to create a
water
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 filtration
system
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 which can help them have enough drinkable
water
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.
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, they will have enough
food
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 for days and
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 have clean
water
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 for a drink. In conclusion, there are still have many people who are hungry, because they do not have money to buy
food
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 and
also
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 drinkable
water
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.
However
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, there are some solutions to solve
this
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 problem by well-developed countries to create a
water
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 filtration
system
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 for them and we can donate some
food
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 to the
food
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 banks.

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