Many people believe that social networking sites (Such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

Social networking sites have become an important part of

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ndividual’s life these days. In recent times, socializing via

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nternet has become very popular and it has few advantages and benefits associated with it.

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, at the same time

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remendous negative

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on individuals and on our society. Social media is a great medium to connect and make acquaintance with people around the globe,

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the excessive

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and sometimes misuse of it has resulted in

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arious noxious

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on the individuals and the society as a whole. The shift to

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irtual world has left a tremendous negative

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on people’s privacy. People spending more and more time on social media often doesn’t respect the privacy of others.

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been a cause of depression for many people.

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, some people

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these platforms to spread hatred which has ignited many community violence. It has

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become a platform to spread false information about certain people which has implicated their real life in a negative way. Every coin has two sides,

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of all the negative implications, the

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of social media has a positive

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as well. The

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of social media has not only bridged the gap between distant friends but it has

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made

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ossible to express once views/ideas to the larger audience. These

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people connected to the world and to

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ndividual’s distant relative and friends. Undoubtedly, the negative implications are far more evident than the positive impacts in today’s world.

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, these impacts can be reduced by using social sites in a controlled and responsible manner and understanding the concept of privacy which has been forgotten since the advent of virtual socializing.