In some high schools, part of the curriculum requires students to participate in community work such as helping the elderly or disabled. In what way do children benefit from this? Do you think it should be part of the curriculum?

The social
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should be encouraged among youngsters. The few institutions should encourage social work among pupils to help retired or
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people.
This
will not only teach minors about their moral duties to the society but
also
assist them to be a good human being in future and having said that, it must be a
part
of their
course
content because
this
will allow them to feel more involved in these activities. The awareness about social responsibilities should be spread among children since their childhood. The institutions may play a vital role in it by allowing young ones to take
part
in social activities
such
as gardening for retired people, giving medications and others.
This
will nurture them as a better human being who
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to contribute
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the betterment of society and more so, they get to know the importance of being cared and helpful in nature.
For instance
, an article in – “ The Times” – stated that Japan is the only country where 80% training institutes organize activities
such
as
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isit to old age home, visit
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special schools due to which it is to consider that younger generation in
this
country is more civilized and well-mannered. Now, when something is beneficial for young one
then
there is no harm in adding it and making it a
part
of their
course
content.
This
will motivate and encourage them to put their best in providing services to the needy people. Along with that, being a
part
of their schedule, they will take it seriously to get better grades in the result and with
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it simultaneously creates a helping nature in them.
For example
, as per
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urvey done in Australia over 50 students, it has been observed that
school going
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population who has social activities as
part
of their
course
material, they enjoy doing them with complete enthusiasm as compare to other students as they take it as a passing time activity. In conclusion, in few of the learning centres, youth need to be a
part
of moral activities
such
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giving aid to older people or
differently abled
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ones, as being in their
course
schedule.
This
will indeed give advantage to scholars because that will make them a better person of the society and we should make these activities a
part
of their
course
to make sure that children feel enchanted while taking
part
in these activities.
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