Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your letter • Give some details about the training course • Describe what kind of equipment you will need for the course • Ask some questions about the facilities at the conference centr

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to do some inquiries about your

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. My company ABC Inc. is holding a workshop on December 20th Friday at 10 am at your

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. The training Is about developing healthy workplace practices and it would be for about 2 hours. I would be needing the

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Room from around 9a am to 1pm. I would kindly request you to provide me with the needed equipment. The training would need a projector and 3 tables to keep at the centre of the

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room.

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is for the hosts so that

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can ask questions anytime. So please bear in mind that the location of these tables is important. The number of

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attending

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training would be close to 100 so I would need a room that would be able to hold

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, I had some questions about the facilities

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as the elevators and entrance and exits. I would like to know how many elevators there are in the building and even the number of exits. It would be easier if we let batches of

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out from different exits to avoid any chaos. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Sam

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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