Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In recent years,

obesity

is

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one of the significant

problem

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in the world, especially in rich countries. As

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one of person who is concern about

this

obesity

probrem

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problem

a lot, I am keen to discuss that what reason of

obesity

problem

and how to solve

this

problem

.

First

of all, I believe that income is

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main reason

of

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obesity

. In

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ecent study, more healthy foods and vegetable products have been consumed by high salary group than low salary group. It means

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low class

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people could not effort to spend money

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their healthy diet. In my opinion, the

gorvernment

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government

can solve

this

problem

by making new rule

such

as increasing minimum wage policy or support to

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low class

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group. The

second

main reason

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obesity

is education. Some people might not know

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how to reduce their weight

then

, how much it would occur critical problems in their body in the future. I had not

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about

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mportance of

excercise

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exercise

until my wife taught me

this

. I guess that if advanced well-being programs will

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reated and educated to people by

gorvernment

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government

or education institutions, that

obesity

problem

will be reduced in future. In conclusion,

obesity

is an important issue in

morden

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modern

society. Many people's life has been ruined by

obesity

or other serious

healthy

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problem

. I believe that

obesity

can be reduced if the

gorvernment

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government

and society

are keep

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to try to solve the

problem

.