Some people say that self employment is better than a job in a country or an institution. Discuss both modes of work and give your opinion

Choosing between

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employment

and

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ob is a difficult decision. Some people consider that

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employment

provide

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flexibility whilst others have contrast viewpoint.

Although

jobs ensure fixed income, I believe

self employed

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people can

work

with more freedom. On

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one side, jobs are less risky and provide security. A fixed amount is credited at the

month end

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in the account of employees. They plan their expenses

accordingly

.

This

help

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them to manage their money wisely.

Further

, time is

also

fixed and employee

get

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regular holidays.

For instance

,

sundays

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are off for the people who are in service.

This

help people to maintain their

work life

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balance.

Hence

, in jobs

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people are free from risk and receive

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ixed income. On the other side,

business men

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have

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reedom to decide and choose their timings. They can pick their working hours.

In addition

,

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rowth of their business is directly dependent on their efforts. If people put huge efforts, they enjoy endeavours.

This

motivate

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them and eventually

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they

work

hard.

For instance

,

business men

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businessmen

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stay motivated and

work

efficiently.

Therefore

, comfort and growth, both are the merits of

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. In conclusion, both

kind

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of

employment

have

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its pros and consequences;

nevertheless

,

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dvantages of

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employment

outweigh

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enefits of doing

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the

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ob. In my perspective,

self employed

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people have more opportunities to develop.