It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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risen in popularity. In

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the

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benefits

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Looking

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at the positives, taking a

year

off before joining the college give the students a significance chance to build up their skills and experience. Students can spend

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year

in travelling outside the country to learn how to deal with different cultures

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or engage local work, which

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to their CV to impress the university admission officer.

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the previous point, the candidates during

this

period would have enough time to read more about their choice of degree they want to do, to ensure that they possess the right

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decision

.

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, reading about pharmaceutical science or practical training in a pharmacy may help to confirm their aim to join

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ollege of pharmacy.

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approach presents with some problems, the most obvious one is the delaying in being a

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orkforce, nowadays after

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great progress of modern life, many things can be done in one

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after finishing higher education. it may be more productive for candidates to start their careers as soon as possible, by finishing their graduation. Another drawback related to those who would spend

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leisure

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without

getting any additional

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benefits

in any field of life . In conclusion,

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off after finishing the high school education

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improve the one,s skills and

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experience

experiences

, along with supply them with

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hance to ensure what they want to study in university, it may be

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considered

as wasting time for many students, and delay workforce joining for others.