Some people believe that having sport in schools is a waste of time and resources, whilst other people believe that sport in schools is a vital part of education. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
According to certain individuals, sports as a
school
subject is an utter dissipation of school
resources and children's time
. Others believe the reverse is true and instead
, consider sports as an essential component in education systems. In this
essay, I will discuss the conflicting viewpoints and explain my support for the former.
On the one hand, there are salient reasons for the support on the inclusion of sports in s
chool curriculum. Add an article
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Firstly
, it is an effective, if not the best, form of diversion from brain draining and physical confining academic subjects. For instance
, when studying academic lectures on science and math, pupils only sits and are confined in the classrooms so they could focus fully when the realm of sapience and numbers are introduced to them. Through, sports, school
-learner are able to get away temporarily from the draining effects of academia into a more physical, engaging and fun aspect of sports . Secondly
, incorporation of sports in the stream of education might encourage students to rediscover themselves in the realm of athletics which could pave their way on the road to s
ports profession.
On the other Add an article
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other hand
, I would agree with those who assert that Change the wording
another hand
other hands
compulsary
sports engagement is a waste of Correct your spelling
compulsory
time
especially for the students owing to the fact that not every shool-kids has the physical capacity and mental inclination to perform such
activity. For instance
, there are those h
ave physical limitations due to their health status. Some are born with physical defects or debilitating diseases that significantly hamper their capacity to join tedious sports. There those, as well, who prefer arts and crafts rather than laborious activities. Add a pronoun
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Thus
, making it a part of s
chool subject seems unfair and discriminating. Add an article
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Additionally
, educational programmes these days are packed with comprehensive academic contents that needs
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an
immense attention and focus from the learners. Sports, Remove the article
apply
therefore
, would deter kids from studying, thus
would take away from them
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the
a
mple amount of study period.
In conclusion, Add an article
an
although
there individuals who believe in the essentiality of sports in the life of students, I opine that it is a waste of time
and resources as it takes away significant time
from student's study period and not all of them have the capability to perform sports.Submitted by titanesh on
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