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Family party at your house. living in different city Tell him about the party why you want to invite info how to get to the party

#party #house #city #info
Dear Vivek, Hope
this
 letter finds you in radiant health and best of the spirits. It's been very long since we
last
 met. I am writing
this
 letter to invite you to a family party we are arranging on Sunday, 20th December on
o
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ccasion of my parent's silver jubilee. You already know that my parents have a special liking for you and they haven't seen you since you have shifted to Mumbai. I have another selfish motive for inviting you. You can rock the party by playing some songs with your new guitar. I am not going to take no for an answer.
This
 party is on 20th December and we have booked a hall in Dattani Square banquet halls. It's the new hotel located on the highway between Mumbai and Vasai. It's 2
hour
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 away from
you
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 house and
also
 available on google maps for easy navigation. If you are planning to come by bus or train, let me know so that we can arrange a pickup. Looking forward to
see
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 you on
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December. Yours lovingly, Sameer.
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