It is sometimes said that people should be encourages to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is irrefutable; in
this
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contemporary era, the average age of getting
marrierd
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married
has increased above 30.
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, older generation
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youngsters to get married early in life. In my opinion, it is a good idea to subscribe as it is
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beneficial
for both for the individual and for
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ommunity.
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,
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essay will demonstrate the advantages and
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, the disadvantages of planning wedding
befor
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before
a person turns thirty. To commence with, less complication in
conciving
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conceiving
is one of the
benifits
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benefits
of getting married early. It saves an individual not only from emotional but
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inancial crisis.
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, it
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mitigates the burden of treatment on
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overnment; occurs due to treatment taken in public hospitals for
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issues.
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, when a person decides to marry early in life, he
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less
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health problems and can make
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aby without any problems
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fertility
  • Maternal health
  • Psychological stability
  • Social maturity
  • Economic benefits
  • Shared responsibilities
  • Ancestral customs
  • Cultural imperatives
  • Personal development
  • Career establishment
  • Societal norms
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Divorce rates
  • Life decisions
  • Subjective wellbeing
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