Companies now prefer to hire people with good social skills as well as good academic qualifications. Do you think that social skills are now getting more important than educational qualifications?

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my opinion, social skills are equally
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important as academic qualifications.
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say 10 employees are working as part of a team in a company the rapport between the employees will help in achieving success in the project. Academic qualification of an employee will show how good he is in technical aspects.
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theoritical
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knowledge is not only sufficient.Whereas applying the
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knowledge practically in the case study effectively is more important. Social skills
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communicating between the
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and customers vendors and other teams.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Interpersonal skills
  • Emotional intelligence
  • Collaboration
  • Teamwork
  • Leadership
  • Automation
  • Cultural awareness
  • Specialized fields
  • Academic credentials
  • Professional development
  • Networking
  • Cognitive abilities
  • Soft skills
  • Hard skills
  • Adaptability
  • Problem-solving
  • Emotional quotient (EQ)
  • Intellectual quotient (IQ)
  • Workforce dynamics
  • Social aptitude
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