The global demand for oil and gas is increasing. Some believe that we should therefore encourage the exploitation of remote areas. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Oil and gas usage is increasing globally. Current sources are limited,

thus

many rural areas could be the solution

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the crisis.

While

some agree that searching for some new

places

should be encouraged, it could

also

be harmful to our nature. Though there are arguments, I reckon that the negative attributes may not be overlooked by the positive ones.

This

essay will discuss the views.

To begin

with, there are some benefits to

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fuel from urban

places

to meet our rising demand.

Firstly

, industries are growing day by day,

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a result,

it

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they

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needs

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more energy sources. A limited number of sources may not provide

this

amount of power.

For example

, if some more

places

could be found with petroleum, it may provide enough amount for our growing needs.

Secondly

, it could be a good economic source for an undeveloped area if they get fuel. African nations,

for instance

, may come forward to take a chance to research

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it and could arrange a great deal. A progressive world helps us to move forward to a better future.

Therefore

, people are looking for more

places

as a source of

this

power.

On the contrary

, some drawbacks may make it worse. The first is, deforestation, which could be occurred by a huge amount of tree cutting to build a petroleum company.

In other words

, a place in India has been demolished by people to make it suitable for the extraction of oil. The second is hampering

nature

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and quality of the place. An urban area has its own beauty and one should not hamper that.

For example

, an area in Dubai has been completely destroyed by nature for excessive exploitation. Humans do not bother to completely destroy our mother earth just for personal gain.

Moreover

, many

places

could be harmed and lose their own essence. In conclusion,

this

essay has discussed both

merits

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and demerits of finding new

places

for energy extraction.

Although

it is necessary to advance our world, I radically agree that we should not bother more rural

places

in order to get more fuel.

Hence

, It is our duty to preserve our planet and reconsider the consequences.