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Many people believe that formal “pen and paper” examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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Examinations
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 play an important role in evaluating individual educational success. Some people say that traditional
examinations
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 are not the right way to
measure
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 academic achievement. In my opinion, there are many other ways to assess education. In
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 discuss different types of assessments with examples. There are many kinds of fields available at present,
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 each of
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 has a special requirement to
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 the criteria, an individual must be assessed based
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 the necessity.
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, a student who is studying
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supply chain management should have
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theory knowledge, where he should memorize all concepts about the modes of transportation and loads.
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, he or she should be evaluated on a
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 exam.
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,
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 their achievement.
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, there is a certain education field, which is evaluated differently. To illustrate
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 view, a medical student, who plays a crucial role in society should be evaluated differently.
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, she should be evaluated by checking their practical knowledge as they are trained or practised doing surgeries.
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 their success in their education. Which
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 and people to consider.
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, not all the
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 are conducted traditionally. Each should be evaluated as per their necessity. There are many domains which require purely practical understanding
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 some need only theory.
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, in my opinion, formal “pen and paper”
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 are not
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