You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell: • explain how you knew about the plans • describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood • suggest a possible solution to the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to complain about the plans to construct an

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in Milton.

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Bhoomi Nalla and I live in Milton. I have read the newspaper and came across the news about the plans to construct an

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in my neighbourhood and I am very disappointed with

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idea. As you know, Milton is surrounded by other cities, within thirty minutes we can reach

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airport

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which is in Mississauga. There are many negative consequences with

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construction

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since there are many schools

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could cause

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to the students and tall residential buildings around the locality.

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, there will be sound pollution which will disturb people who are residing in the city. I would suggest you consider the countryside for constructing an

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as there will be minimal issues and less population when compared to cities. I hope you would consider the above problems and change plans to construct an

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. Yours Faithfully, Bhoomi Nalla

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